Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Your A Lie.

For those who aren't aware, I've been writing songs since I was a little girl and it's one of the many things I'm very passionate about. For the first time today, I am showing you a rough draft of a song I wrote a couple nights ago. I haven't finished writing and editing it, but I thought I'd see what you guys think so far. I hope you enjoy.


This isn't how it started,
Two kids, two worlds miles apart.
The only difference is important...
They were in love from the start.

And you can't, take away, this feeling.
And you can't kill the pain,
In her heart.

You can't fix a mirror,

Even when it's cracked,
you can still see yourself cry..

Oh my dear...your a lie.

(Mhm,) Your a lie..

His world is perfect there without her.
But she see's passion, life and love.
He doesn't look twice at her bleeding..
"Who is bleeding" when he feels so alive?


Stay Beautiful



  1. it's a good song, but everyone writes about crying in your beer songs, this world needs more songs that are up beat and passionate.
    can you produce a couple?

    1. Hey Myron!

      Firstly, thanks so much for reading! :D Secondly, I totally understand where your coming from - But I actually just write about whatever I've gone through or am passionate about. My life is in whatever I write in these lyrics..And I understand that the world may want to hear "Happy" music, but I write however I feel, whether that be happy or not, ya know?

      I do have quite a few more positive and uplifting songs, maybe I'll post them sometime.


  2. What makes a song, poem or writing real is that it bares the soul of the writer. Sad I know but sometimes there are more hard times than happy ones. Very good Mak. :-) It would be nice if it were otherwise Myron :-)

    1. I couldn't agree more Yolanda, it's as though you've stolen the words from my mouth. Haha.

      Thanks so much for your feedback,